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Young hands fumbling through inherent motions with graceless inexperience. He's never done it before. Put on a brave face to mask the panicked breathing. Sweat rolling in waves down an unwrinkled brow. Heart thumping loud to escape a hairless chest. An adolescent still wet behind the ears. His body has outgrown the blissful freedom of childish naivety. Ungainly limbs, programmed to a new purpose, usurp that serenity. Silent expectation. The time has come. He fires his gun. "You're a man now, son." But he's learnt to **** a man, before he's even so much as kissed a girl.
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Sep 5, 2019
Sep 5, 2019 at 6:37 PM UTC
Innocence Lost
Young hands fumbling through inherent motions with graceless inexperience. He's never done it before. Put on a brave face to mask the panicked breathing. Sweat rolling in waves down an unwrinkled brow. Heart thumping loud to escape a hairless chest. An adolescent still wet behind the ears. His body has outgrown the blissful freedom of childish naivety. Ungainly limbs, programmed to a new purpose, usurp that serenity. Silent expectation. The time has come. He fires his gun. "You're a man now, son." But he's learnt to **** a man, before he's even so much as kissed a girl.
I was inspired by the particular line of Sting's "Children's Crusade": "Virgins with rifles" I thought this was a beautifully tragic image to toy with.
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Sep 5, 2019
Sep 5, 2019 at 6:37 PM UTC
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