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ah, now I see how you really feel that fake loving surface is starting to peel i've tried to be the best, all just for you and i want you to know I do all I can do but you shove it right back all in my face and I think I could see me somewhat replaced cause I seem to make it worse when you need someone most you'd be better off speaking to a ******* fence post please dont get me wrong I love you endlessly but you seem to deserve someone better than me.
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Jul 19, 2010
Jul 19, 2010 at 7:39 PM UTC
better than me
ah, now I see how you really feel that fake loving surface is starting to peel i've tried to be the best, all just for you and i want you to know I do all I can do but you shove it right back all in my face and I think I could see me somewhat replaced cause I seem to make it worse when you need someone most you'd be better off speaking to a ******* fence post please dont get me wrong I love you endlessly but you seem to deserve someone better than me.
Nothing fancy at all. Just to the point.
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Jul 19, 2010
Jul 19, 2010 at 7:39 PM UTC
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