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God, I love your scent. Forgive me. I am speaking like a man leaning too close to his own loneliness, like someone counting courage in empty bottles. Your aroma does something dangerous. It opens doors in me I keep padlocked. One door holds the boy who once believed in love at first sight, the other holds the man who knows love is not a lottery ticket but a responsibility with rent due every month. I saw you and for a second my ribs forgot their job. My chest became a cathedral with no priest, just echoes. There are two of me. One wants to reach. The other folds his hands and steps back, because desire is cheap but devotion costs a life. I want you. That is the simplest truth. But I have learned that wanting a woman and being ready for a woman are not twins. They are distant cousins who don’t attend the same funerals. So I stay away. Not because you are not worth it, but because you are. On the fifth bottle I learn that intoxication is honest. It tells me I am not afraid of you. I am afraid of failing you. The beer burns, but it does not burn like the thought of holding something sacred with unsteady hands. So I sit with my longing like a man outside a house he cannot yet build. And maybe that is maturity. To admire the garden without stepping on the flowers. ~PJNK
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Feb 16
Feb 16, 2026 at 3:21 PM UTC
My sober self
God, I love your scent. Forgive me. I am speaking like a man leaning too close to his own loneliness, like someone counting courage in empty bottles. Your aroma does something dangerous. It opens doors in me I keep padlocked. One door holds the boy who once believed in love at first sight, the other holds the man who knows love is not a lottery ticket but a responsibility with rent due every month. I saw you and for a second my ribs forgot their job. My chest became a cathedral with no priest, just echoes. There are two of me. One wants to reach. The other folds his hands and steps back, because desire is cheap but devotion costs a life. I want you. That is the simplest truth. But I have learned that wanting a woman and being ready for a woman are not twins. They are distant cousins who don’t attend the same funerals. So I stay away. Not because you are not worth it, but because you are. On the fifth bottle I learn that intoxication is honest. It tells me I am not afraid of you. I am afraid of failing you. The beer burns, but it does not burn like the thought of holding something sacred with unsteady hands. So I sit with my longing like a man outside a house he cannot yet build. And maybe that is maturity. To admire the garden without stepping on the flowers. ~PJNK
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Feb 16
Feb 16, 2026 at 3:21 PM UTC
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