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Venus, O Venus! you do not shine—no, you burn, awake and knowing, a luminous wound in the sky’s quiet body, a beacon for all who lift their eyes, aching for direction. but today, you have slipped behind the curtain of the world, a veiled ember in the great turning, lost to our sight— but not gone. this morning, I too am unseen, folded into myself, caught in the invisible workings of some celestial geometry that cages and releases, cages and releases. there is a breath at my back, an absence pressing in, a presence without a face— like hands just beyond the veil, like voices speaking without words, like the quiet dread of being watched by something I cannot name. and so, I ask, trembling— what am I to do with this? how do I stand beneath this weight without crumbling? and from the silence, an answer, a whisper that is not sound but understanding— flower and fall. this is the way of all things. this fear, this pressure, this restless hum beneath the skin— it is not death, but motion. it is not decay, but renewal. do you not see? what once clung to you, what once devoured you, is now peeling away, a husk lifting in the wind. let it go. let it fall. let the unseen hands carry it as ants carry petals to their hidden cities, as birds take seeds to waiting earth. what seems an end is only another sowing. Venus is not gone. she only moves beyond your sight, whispering in the quiet— grow.
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Feb 16, 2025
Feb 16, 2025 at 8:40 AM UTC
the veil of Venus
Venus, O Venus! you do not shine—no, you burn, awake and knowing, a luminous wound in the sky’s quiet body, a beacon for all who lift their eyes, aching for direction. but today, you have slipped behind the curtain of the world, a veiled ember in the great turning, lost to our sight— but not gone. this morning, I too am unseen, folded into myself, caught in the invisible workings of some celestial geometry that cages and releases, cages and releases. there is a breath at my back, an absence pressing in, a presence without a face— like hands just beyond the veil, like voices speaking without words, like the quiet dread of being watched by something I cannot name. and so, I ask, trembling— what am I to do with this? how do I stand beneath this weight without crumbling? and from the silence, an answer, a whisper that is not sound but understanding— flower and fall. this is the way of all things. this fear, this pressure, this restless hum beneath the skin— it is not death, but motion. it is not decay, but renewal. do you not see? what once clung to you, what once devoured you, is now peeling away, a husk lifting in the wind. let it go. let it fall. let the unseen hands carry it as ants carry petals to their hidden cities, as birds take seeds to waiting earth. what seems an end is only another sowing. Venus is not gone. she only moves beyond your sight, whispering in the quiet— grow.
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37/M/Texas
Feb 16, 2025
Feb 16, 2025 at 8:40 AM UTC
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