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)( )( )( /\ •••• We are the Poets ( we are sooo sensitive! ) • The vision of YOU NAKED ! Floating ! Nakedly floating ! In the bathtub With your gently slit wrists Pulsatingly offering your Life to the healing waters !!!! I picture the bathtub as the GREAT PRIMORDIAL SEA ! and your senseless body 1 of 1000's Of tender lifeless bodies Bobbing up and down on the waters ! A TOTALLY RIGHTEOUS OFFERING ! There before the EYE OF GOD ( and Me ) • The bobbing of the waters The hypnotic spreading Of the legs The revealing Of the secret sacred opening ! Before the EYES OF GOD and MAN •• ( WE ARE THE POETS ! WE ARE THE SENSITIVE !!!! ---we who truly face the beauty and the pain --- ) •• The healers ! The gift givers ! We stare into her secret sacred opening and wonder At her soft offering Her gentle pornographic vulnerability ////// HOW HARD IT IS !! ( and getting harder ! ) // WE ARE THE MASSIVELY HEROIC POETS ! our brave words float onto the paper As wisely and as purely As our blood flows out As our blood inundates the waters ! As our minds inundate the helpless female body Floating there In its pornographic hapless splendor And as TRUE POETS ! we cry out MORE ! MORE ! as the bobbing waters Spread her open and we gaze on Soooo sensitively And so sensitively We erase all sense of pain or shame /// WE ARE THE POETS ! yes we are ! We write LOVE POEMS! ( don't we ? ) Soooo sensitive ! // WE THE POETS ! We are soooo sensitive !
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Apr 20, 2015
Apr 20, 2015 at 2:15 PM UTC
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)( )( )( /\ •••• We are the Poets ( we are sooo sensitive! ) • The vision of YOU NAKED ! Floating ! Nakedly floating ! In the bathtub With your gently slit wrists Pulsatingly offering your Life to the healing waters !!!! I picture the bathtub as the GREAT PRIMORDIAL SEA ! and your senseless body 1 of 1000's Of tender lifeless bodies Bobbing up and down on the waters ! A TOTALLY RIGHTEOUS OFFERING ! There before the EYE OF GOD ( and Me ) • The bobbing of the waters The hypnotic spreading Of the legs The revealing Of the secret sacred opening ! Before the EYES OF GOD and MAN •• ( WE ARE THE POETS ! WE ARE THE SENSITIVE !!!! ---we who truly face the beauty and the pain --- ) •• The healers ! The gift givers ! We stare into her secret sacred opening and wonder At her soft offering Her gentle pornographic vulnerability ////// HOW HARD IT IS !! ( and getting harder ! ) // WE ARE THE MASSIVELY HEROIC POETS ! our brave words float onto the paper As wisely and as purely As our blood flows out As our blood inundates the waters ! As our minds inundate the helpless female body Floating there In its pornographic hapless splendor And as TRUE POETS ! we cry out MORE ! MORE ! as the bobbing waters Spread her open and we gaze on Soooo sensitively And so sensitively We erase all sense of pain or shame /// WE ARE THE POETS ! yes we are ! We write LOVE POEMS! ( don't we ? ) Soooo sensitive ! // WE THE POETS ! We are soooo sensitive !
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jeffrey-robin
Apr 20, 2015
Apr 20, 2015 at 2:15 PM UTC
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