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I ate lunch at Taco Bell this afternoon. As I was people watching, I noticed a guy who looked just like "Chief" Bromden. He was working on a burrito and looking forlorn. As he took his biggest bite, the bite that signified his commitment to enjoying that burrito, all the guts fall out of it. He was visibly upset by this and embarrassed as well. It made me think that such a happening is universal. Hot, gooey pizza toppings or burrito guts have fallen in our collective laps or bounced off of our shirts and onto the floors of a million restaurants between us. It ***** and often it produces that feeling we get in our stomachs when we’ve become the center of unwanted attention; even if no one is watching. This guy had the saddest face I’d ever seen. It was really depressing. But, in the end, I found myself hoping that he’d smother me with a pillow if ever he found me to be the victim of an unnecessary lobotomy. **** you, Nurse Rached. *** -JBClaywell ©P&ZPublications; 2016
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Aug 15, 2016
Aug 15, 2016 at 11:53 AM UTC
Burritos w/ "The Chief"
I ate lunch at Taco Bell this afternoon. As I was people watching, I noticed a guy who looked just like "Chief" Bromden. He was working on a burrito and looking forlorn. As he took his biggest bite, the bite that signified his commitment to enjoying that burrito, all the guts fall out of it. He was visibly upset by this and embarrassed as well. It made me think that such a happening is universal. Hot, gooey pizza toppings or burrito guts have fallen in our collective laps or bounced off of our shirts and onto the floors of a million restaurants between us. It ***** and often it produces that feeling we get in our stomachs when we’ve become the center of unwanted attention; even if no one is watching. This guy had the saddest face I’d ever seen. It was really depressing. But, in the end, I found myself hoping that he’d smother me with a pillow if ever he found me to be the victim of an unnecessary lobotomy. **** you, Nurse Rached. *** -JBClaywell ©P&ZPublications; 2016
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Aug 15, 2016
Aug 15, 2016 at 11:53 AM UTC
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