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He stands solidly still, a malformation Rush hour commuters about him whirl Arrival or departure in subway station? Intrans intelligence, subconscious swirl Isolated, his mind in most violent hurl Facing whole extent of impertinent data Comatose commuter suffers info slow-mode Wife, boss, kids all part in sub-matter Too much for one brain to devour, decode Cell phones, microchips, transistor’s overload Components lack tactile connection Wavelengths of broadcasts, meltdown occurs Keeping too connected, causing mind ejection No app for that on tablet to refer Now stuck in commuter rut with no transfers
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Apr 18, 2016
Apr 18, 2016 at 11:51 PM UTC
Comatose Commuter
He stands solidly still, a malformation Rush hour commuters about him whirl Arrival or departure in subway station? Intrans intelligence, subconscious swirl Isolated, his mind in most violent hurl Facing whole extent of impertinent data Comatose commuter suffers info slow-mode Wife, boss, kids all part in sub-matter Too much for one brain to devour, decode Cell phones, microchips, transistor’s overload Components lack tactile connection Wavelengths of broadcasts, meltdown occurs Keeping too connected, causing mind ejection No app for that on tablet to refer Now stuck in commuter rut with no transfers
Are you a comatose commuter?
pj-poesy
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Apr 18, 2016
Apr 18, 2016 at 11:51 PM UTC
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