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His eyes, lit like burning cigarettes, smolder under an almost full moon. Her eyes, alive as electric wires. surge with excitement at the view.
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 12:38 AM UTC
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His eyes, lit like burning cigarettes, smolder under an almost full moon. Her eyes, alive as electric wires. surge with excitement at the view.
I reworked some bits I wanted to reuse from an earlier poem today into more of a short form.
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Mar 31, 2013
Mar 31, 2013 at 12:38 AM UTC
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