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In her leggings, and her striped Cape Cod dress, we meet Kim. She’s in possession of ankles the circumference of Kennedy half-dollars, a wasp’s nest of black curls piled on her head, she’s a straight line from shoulder to heel. She’s a real catch, Kim is, and she knows it. She has no idea that she looks like a peacock dipped in motor oil, she’s giving ol’ Josh the goldfish eye. We’re all here to see The Freight Train, The Rabbit Killer, but Kim’s hoping for more. Kim’s looking to get her bunny stuffed, she don’t care much about who does the stuffing, but she’s hoping for Mr. Clark, he’s her mark, no doubt. Now, Josh bought Kim a beer, but was asked to leave the cap on, He looks at me, confused. “It’s so you can’t Rufie her. She wants to **** you, but she wants it to be her idea.” Josh nods; so does Kim. As the evening proceeds, and we’ve all done “The Freight Train Boogie” it’s become increasingly obvious to Kim that Josh is not agreeable to buttering her biscuits, she moves, which is to say stumbles, around the room. Every so often she’ll climb onto the lap of some guy she’s known, biblically or otherwise, before. Sam, Bob, Steve, Ralph, or Charlie, it hardly matters. Earlier, she’d told us about the 6-year-old twins, the teenaged daughter at home, ex-husband, boyfriend, whatever, in jail. The Freight Train moves ever onward, but I’ve seen too much of ol’ Kimmy’s show, now depressed, it’s time to bail. *** -JBClaywell ©P&ZPublications; 2016
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Apr 4, 2016
Apr 4, 2016 at 11:47 AM UTC
Freight Train Rabbit Killer, Josh and Kim: A Sordid Tale of The Muny Inn (Actually, it’s not so much a tale as it is a collection of lines, but then it is 3am on a Saturday. So, **** it, right?)
In her leggings, and her striped Cape Cod dress, we meet Kim. She’s in possession of ankles the circumference of Kennedy half-dollars, a wasp’s nest of black curls piled on her head, she’s a straight line from shoulder to heel. She’s a real catch, Kim is, and she knows it. She has no idea that she looks like a peacock dipped in motor oil, she’s giving ol’ Josh the goldfish eye. We’re all here to see The Freight Train, The Rabbit Killer, but Kim’s hoping for more. Kim’s looking to get her bunny stuffed, she don’t care much about who does the stuffing, but she’s hoping for Mr. Clark, he’s her mark, no doubt. Now, Josh bought Kim a beer, but was asked to leave the cap on, He looks at me, confused. “It’s so you can’t Rufie her. She wants to **** you, but she wants it to be her idea.” Josh nods; so does Kim. As the evening proceeds, and we’ve all done “The Freight Train Boogie” it’s become increasingly obvious to Kim that Josh is not agreeable to buttering her biscuits, she moves, which is to say stumbles, around the room. Every so often she’ll climb onto the lap of some guy she’s known, biblically or otherwise, before. Sam, Bob, Steve, Ralph, or Charlie, it hardly matters. Earlier, she’d told us about the 6-year-old twins, the teenaged daughter at home, ex-husband, boyfriend, whatever, in jail. The Freight Train moves ever onward, but I’ve seen too much of ol’ Kimmy’s show, now depressed, it’s time to bail. *** -JBClaywell ©P&ZPublications; 2016
There is a band, locally, that is called Freight Train Rabbit Killer. They are astounding.  The first time Josh and I saw them, we left the venue and vowed to see them play as often as we were able.  This poem is set in a tavern that housed the second time that I’d been able to see them play live. Sadly, both Josh and I left early this time around. Kim’s dealings with Josh and some of the other guys in the audience was pretty intense and really hollowing. I hope she finds what she’s looking for.
jay-claywell
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Apr 4, 2016
Apr 4, 2016 at 11:47 AM UTC
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