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How does the mountain thank the breeze? How does the ocean sway, A changed direction switched to thee A wave who could not stay Two mere creatures of the dust, And one, by far, the better Deep below the world's thick crust With dreams matched to the letter The icy breeze may hold the truth Which one, unwisely, held The other, so,  had thought, 'forsooth!' The one, too far, compelled A ring, a wrap, of roses neat All thorns and vines and taint Around, around, to near defeat One never was a saint And so one leaves with fear and hate After layers of mistake Some will think it comes too late The other one might break But this was not to spite from one And not in fault of thee Nor in rashness, careless done Mayhap one day you'll see How in this truth, so taught by act The withering may start The found are far more lost, in fact Without a place in heart And so one says goodbye at last To her friend, the other Though space between their lives is vast They'll meet in yet another
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Oct 9, 2014
Oct 9, 2014 at 9:31 PM UTC
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How does the mountain thank the breeze? How does the ocean sway, A changed direction switched to thee A wave who could not stay Two mere creatures of the dust, And one, by far, the better Deep below the world's thick crust With dreams matched to the letter The icy breeze may hold the truth Which one, unwisely, held The other, so,  had thought, 'forsooth!' The one, too far, compelled A ring, a wrap, of roses neat All thorns and vines and taint Around, around, to near defeat One never was a saint And so one leaves with fear and hate After layers of mistake Some will think it comes too late The other one might break But this was not to spite from one And not in fault of thee Nor in rashness, careless done Mayhap one day you'll see How in this truth, so taught by act The withering may start The found are far more lost, in fact Without a place in heart And so one says goodbye at last To her friend, the other Though space between their lives is vast They'll meet in yet another
rachel-cloud
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Oct 9, 2014
Oct 9, 2014 at 9:31 PM UTC
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