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I was in the country when the city skyline fell And in the city when the gunman stepped out Imposing his malevolent, brute will I thought, Dear God, there’s no way this ends well There’s more blood not yet shed, I’ve little doubt So many still, so many angry still Twenty young children in their secondary home As well as six women who share my calling Had their futures clipped, eclipsed, made naught We cried, we played, as Nero mourned his Rome Their bodies fell, are now forever falling What god would let them stay uncaught?
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Nov 11, 2024
Nov 11, 2024 at 2:43 PM UTC
New England And New York
I was in the country when the city skyline fell And in the city when the gunman stepped out Imposing his malevolent, brute will I thought, Dear God, there’s no way this ends well There’s more blood not yet shed, I’ve little doubt So many still, so many angry still Twenty young children in their secondary home As well as six women who share my calling Had their futures clipped, eclipsed, made naught We cried, we played, as Nero mourned his Rome Their bodies fell, are now forever falling What god would let them stay uncaught?
Originally published in Nomad Choir's Poetry Journal, April 2019. Note: “well” is not supposed to be its own line. That’s merely a spacing issue. The rhyme structure is ABC/ABC DEF/DEF, with a total of twelve lines.
AlainaHammond
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44/F/California
Nov 11, 2024
Nov 11, 2024 at 2:43 PM UTC
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