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When at first I looked into your eyes, I saw a dim light Uninteresting Lacking hope, Not patient, or kind, or anything in between. After many nights spent trying to peel away your layers, I finally found what I was looking for. A soul, A passion, A spark with the potential to ignite. I fell deeper and deeper as I drowned in the pools of your Deep blue eyes. So beautiful. So serene. How did I know I loved you? It wasn’t like how the poets had described it. No. It was much greater than that. I could never find the words, that would accurately depict how much you mean to me, or how perfect I think you are. But I think that if I were to tell you anything, about the way you make me feel, the one thing that you deserve to know is that you set my heart and soul on fire. You burn me brighter than the sun.”
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Jul 5, 2013
Jul 5, 2013 at 4:34 PM UTC
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When at first I looked into your eyes, I saw a dim light Uninteresting Lacking hope, Not patient, or kind, or anything in between. After many nights spent trying to peel away your layers, I finally found what I was looking for. A soul, A passion, A spark with the potential to ignite. I fell deeper and deeper as I drowned in the pools of your Deep blue eyes. So beautiful. So serene. How did I know I loved you? It wasn’t like how the poets had described it. No. It was much greater than that. I could never find the words, that would accurately depict how much you mean to me, or how perfect I think you are. But I think that if I were to tell you anything, about the way you make me feel, the one thing that you deserve to know is that you set my heart and soul on fire. You burn me brighter than the sun.”
Written about the person I fell in love with many moons ago.
ciara-sarah
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Jul 5, 2013
Jul 5, 2013 at 4:34 PM UTC
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