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People do lose me like the candle. Elegant, quiet, shaped to fit their mood—white, or sometimes colored to soothe or impress. I am placed where they need the glow, where comfort or atmosphere is wanted. I offer it without demand. There is no darkness when I’m lit—not even when everything else fades. But they forget that the shine has a cost. That the flame, though constant, feeds on something finite. They admire the light but ignore the burning. They think presence means permanence. Then one day, the light is gone. Not with noise, not with warning—just no longer there. And only then does the absence reveal what the glow never needed to prove. Not everything that illuminates announces its worth. Some things, by the time they’re missed, have already become memory. And memory, unlike flame, does not warm.
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May 11, 2025
May 11, 2025 at 8:34 AM UTC
The Quiet Flame
People do lose me like the candle. Elegant, quiet, shaped to fit their mood—white, or sometimes colored to soothe or impress. I am placed where they need the glow, where comfort or atmosphere is wanted. I offer it without demand. There is no darkness when I’m lit—not even when everything else fades. But they forget that the shine has a cost. That the flame, though constant, feeds on something finite. They admire the light but ignore the burning. They think presence means permanence. Then one day, the light is gone. Not with noise, not with warning—just no longer there. And only then does the absence reveal what the glow never needed to prove. Not everything that illuminates announces its worth. Some things, by the time they’re missed, have already become memory. And memory, unlike flame, does not warm.
Some things give without announcement
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May 11, 2025
May 11, 2025 at 8:34 AM UTC
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