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why do you not crit my work for i am just a people just like you and i need feedback i **** and **** like do you all come on tell me what do you think of the poems i put on here?
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Sep 1, 2012
Sep 1, 2012 at 8:46 PM UTC
This day or night come on people?
why do you not crit my work for i am just a people just like you and i need feedback i **** and **** like do you all come on tell me what do you think of the poems i put on here?
paul-hardwick
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Sep 1, 2012
Sep 1, 2012 at 8:46 PM UTC
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