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Something pierces my chest As your heart wanders off Too scared to hold me Too hard to be soft          Though blade's not that sharp          The wound isn't shallow          My knuckles bone white          As truth trims the tallow               Am I clinging too tightly               to promising words?               Have I made up this future               Now prophecy cursed?       Am I overreacting       To some fickle heart's tune       It's rhythmic pulse stirring       Too quickly too soon?                                            A scale cannot measure                                            A concept abstract;                                                        Heartstrings untethered                                                        Featherweight cracks. And yet they are heavy                                                                              And still it holds true                                          This uncertain fool                                          Falls sick loving you.
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Dec 10, 2025
Dec 10, 2025 at 2:50 PM UTC
Why Am I Like This
Something pierces my chest As your heart wanders off Too scared to hold me Too hard to be soft          Though blade's not that sharp          The wound isn't shallow          My knuckles bone white          As truth trims the tallow               Am I clinging too tightly               to promising words?               Have I made up this future               Now prophecy cursed?       Am I overreacting       To some fickle heart's tune       It's rhythmic pulse stirring       Too quickly too soon?                                            A scale cannot measure                                            A concept abstract;                                                        Heartstrings untethered                                                        Featherweight cracks. And yet they are heavy                                                                              And still it holds true                                          This uncertain fool                                          Falls sick loving you.
Intentionally a little self aware with the title because the piece is, too. Played with the idea of my immediate response to certain news vs the unfairness to cast judgment on the heart of another. Acknowledging my emotional response does not match the rational one, but that does not mean it isn't worth acknowledging, exploring, accepting. Thus, "Uncertain fool."
nyx-ciel
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Dec 10, 2025
Dec 10, 2025 at 2:50 PM UTC
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