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Sophia's parents (Polish refugees during WW2) have a large crucifix above their double bed; wooden, with a plaster cast Christ whose features are dour, some aspects chipped. She enters the room; a smell of staleness, pipe smoke, her mother's old fashion scent. She looks at the crucifix; kneels on the bed, and rubs the feet of the plaster cast Christ; remember the time when her parents were away for the day, and she brought that Benny boy in here and they made love on the bed, she laying there, tapping his buttocks to ride him on; looking up at the features of the dour Christ, no change of expression; Benny's fast breathing hot by her ear, the whole arena somehow surreal, lacking meaning, a purposeless show. After he'd done and left and she tidied up and made the bed and smoothed the covers and looked at the Christ the dourness was still there, but a sense of disappointment hung in the air.
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Dec 16, 2014
Dec 16, 2014 at 2:44 AM UTC
HUNG IN THE AIR.
Sophia's parents (Polish refugees during WW2) have a large crucifix above their double bed; wooden, with a plaster cast Christ whose features are dour, some aspects chipped. She enters the room; a smell of staleness, pipe smoke, her mother's old fashion scent. She looks at the crucifix; kneels on the bed, and rubs the feet of the plaster cast Christ; remember the time when her parents were away for the day, and she brought that Benny boy in here and they made love on the bed, she laying there, tapping his buttocks to ride him on; looking up at the features of the dour Christ, no change of expression; Benny's fast breathing hot by her ear, the whole arena somehow surreal, lacking meaning, a purposeless show. After he'd done and left and she tidied up and made the bed and smoothed the covers and looked at the Christ the dourness was still there, but a sense of disappointment hung in the air.
A GIRL REMEMBERS MAKING LOVE IN HER PARENTS' BEDROOM IN 1969.
terry-collett
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Dec 16, 2014
Dec 16, 2014 at 2:44 AM UTC
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