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A long hall of pale stone. The walls looked bare until I walked deeper. Then the echoes appeared – silhouettes of the lives I almost lived. Me in another city. Me boarding a train I never took. Me laughing with someone whose face I couldn’t quite see. Not regrets. Acknowledgments. At the center, a glass sphere held the sum of my almosts. I touched it. It warmed. And the ache softened. I left lighter. The Shifting City: “The Gallery of Echoes” (poem) I walk into the hall of pale stone and at first the walls look empty, smooth as unbroken ice. But then the air shifts, and the room inhales, and the outlines begin to rise. Not portraits. Not ghosts. Just the faint blue silhouettes of the lives I almost lived. One flickers to my left – a version of me boarding a train I never took, his coat catching the wind of a city I never learned to pronounce. He doesn’t look back. Another stands at a window in an apartment I nearly rented, watering a plant I never owned, humming a tune I never learned. He seems content, but he is not me. A third sits at a café table with someone whose face is blurred by possibility. Their laughter ripples like a memory I can almost touch but never quite claim. I walk slowly, and the echoes shift with me, as if adjusting their distance out of courtesy. None of them accuse me. None of them beckon. They simply exist – parallel lines that never intersected but still shaped the geometry of my life. At the center of the hall a glass sphere waits, its surface swirling with faint colors like breath on winter air. I place my hand on it. Warmth rises through my palm, and for a moment I feel every version of myself that could have been – not with longing, not with grief, but with a strange, quiet recognition. The sphere dims, as if bowing, and the echoes soften into a gentle blue haze. I exhale. The hall exhales with me. When I turn to leave, the silhouettes remain behind – not abandoned, not dismissed, but finally at rest. I step back into the city lighter than I entered, carrying only the life that is mine.
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Feb 26
Feb 26, 2026 at 2:28 AM UTC
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A long hall of pale stone. The walls looked bare until I walked deeper. Then the echoes appeared – silhouettes of the lives I almost lived. Me in another city. Me boarding a train I never took. Me laughing with someone whose face I couldn’t quite see. Not regrets. Acknowledgments. At the center, a glass sphere held the sum of my almosts. I touched it. It warmed. And the ache softened. I left lighter. The Shifting City: “The Gallery of Echoes” (poem) I walk into the hall of pale stone and at first the walls look empty, smooth as unbroken ice. But then the air shifts, and the room inhales, and the outlines begin to rise. Not portraits. Not ghosts. Just the faint blue silhouettes of the lives I almost lived. One flickers to my left – a version of me boarding a train I never took, his coat catching the wind of a city I never learned to pronounce. He doesn’t look back. Another stands at a window in an apartment I nearly rented, watering a plant I never owned, humming a tune I never learned. He seems content, but he is not me. A third sits at a café table with someone whose face is blurred by possibility. Their laughter ripples like a memory I can almost touch but never quite claim. I walk slowly, and the echoes shift with me, as if adjusting their distance out of courtesy. None of them accuse me. None of them beckon. They simply exist – parallel lines that never intersected but still shaped the geometry of my life. At the center of the hall a glass sphere waits, its surface swirling with faint colors like breath on winter air. I place my hand on it. Warmth rises through my palm, and for a moment I feel every version of myself that could have been – not with longing, not with grief, but with a strange, quiet recognition. The sphere dims, as if bowing, and the echoes soften into a gentle blue haze. I exhale. The hall exhales with me. When I turn to leave, the silhouettes remain behind – not abandoned, not dismissed, but finally at rest. I step back into the city lighter than I entered, carrying only the life that is mine.
From the cycle “Presence in the Ruins: The Shifting City.” “The Gallery of Echoes” takes place in a quiet blue hall where the speaker meets silhouettes of the lives they almost lived. These aren’t regrets but possibilities—paths not taken, selves that hovered at the edge of becoming. By touching the warm sphere at the room’s center, the speaker recognizes these unlived lives without grief, and leaves lighter, carrying only the life that is truly theirs.
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Feb 26
Feb 26, 2026 at 2:28 AM UTC
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