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Don't listen to prejudice, Make your own path, A person's life doesn't belong to others, Hasty decisions destroys friendships. Movement forward is most important. Be thankful for your life and good friends, Like ocean waves and beaches, A day full of parties and fun. A Mountain is meant to climb. Move forward and Silently. Do not listen to prejudice, And also listen to your heart, Cautiously, Always look to the future... ... The secret revealed. ”Don't make a hasty movement. Be like a mountain. Move silently and cautiously.” -Admiral Yi Sun-sin Copyright © Ronald J Chapman All Rights Reserved.
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Dec 4, 2014
Dec 4, 2014 at 6:05 AM UTC
Make Your Own Path (Secret Message)
Don't listen to prejudice, Make your own path, A person's life doesn't belong to others, Hasty decisions destroys friendships. Movement forward is most important. Be thankful for your life and good friends, Like ocean waves and beaches, A day full of parties and fun. A Mountain is meant to climb. Move forward and Silently. Do not listen to prejudice, And also listen to your heart, Cautiously, Always look to the future... ... The secret revealed. ”Don't make a hasty movement. Be like a mountain. Move silently and cautiously.” -Admiral Yi Sun-sin Copyright © Ronald J Chapman All Rights Reserved.
Yi Sun-shin Home http://www.koreanhero.net/en/NationalHeroOfKorea.htm The secret is revealed by reading the word at the beginning of each line of the poem vertically. This then forms a sentence, when read down with an additional message.
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Dec 4, 2014
Dec 4, 2014 at 6:05 AM UTC
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