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Shame, a blur of red and orange, smudging the canvas Lost, a jagged line, twisting and turning Afraid, a swirl of blue and black, consuming the frame Stares, a splash of yellow, piercing the darkness Voice, a stroke of purple, trembling and raw Frame, a smear of green, contorted and broken No name, a drip of pink, fading into the background No future, a smudge of brown, dull and uninviting All bridges, a streak of white, burned and crumbling Shame, a prison, enclosing the soul in a cage of color Guilt, a shadow, creeping in and consuming the light Freedom, a burst of gold, shining and radiant Love, a flood of color, washing away the shame and the guilt Hope, a beacon, shining and guiding the way
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Jan 16, 2023
Jan 16, 2023 at 7:48 PM UTC
healing canvas
Shame, a blur of red and orange, smudging the canvas Lost, a jagged line, twisting and turning Afraid, a swirl of blue and black, consuming the frame Stares, a splash of yellow, piercing the darkness Voice, a stroke of purple, trembling and raw Frame, a smear of green, contorted and broken No name, a drip of pink, fading into the background No future, a smudge of brown, dull and uninviting All bridges, a streak of white, burned and crumbling Shame, a prison, enclosing the soul in a cage of color Guilt, a shadow, creeping in and consuming the light Freedom, a burst of gold, shining and radiant Love, a flood of color, washing away the shame and the guilt Hope, a beacon, shining and guiding the way
rewriting an old piece in a more dynamic and simple format... I can get wordy, and this is a good exercise in less being more.
thomas-james-hogan
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Jan 16, 2023
Jan 16, 2023 at 7:48 PM UTC
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