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Noxious cold blinds, his blood pulses and the brain goes numb. Panic fills the smoke-thick atmosphere. A "Who's there?" falls before a silent response. A clack under a thumb. The musket metal gleams like water in the moonlight. A fire's scent drifts into his nostrils as a steady beat of drums -- "war drums" wiggle through the trees into his electrified mind. Moving forward, the forest canopy transforms-- illuminated tangerine. Sparks snap like upward travelling orange muse. Feathers dance above the flames. [war cries] He retreats back into the leafy abyss.
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Mar 5, 2013
Mar 5, 2013 at 10:44 PM UTC
"Savage" Encounter
Noxious cold blinds, his blood pulses and the brain goes numb. Panic fills the smoke-thick atmosphere. A "Who's there?" falls before a silent response. A clack under a thumb. The musket metal gleams like water in the moonlight. A fire's scent drifts into his nostrils as a steady beat of drums -- "war drums" wiggle through the trees into his electrified mind. Moving forward, the forest canopy transforms-- illuminated tangerine. Sparks snap like upward travelling orange muse. Feathers dance above the flames. [war cries] He retreats back into the leafy abyss.
zach-claycomb
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Mar 5, 2013
Mar 5, 2013 at 10:44 PM UTC
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