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Pickles Do you remember your grandpa’s cabin? Where signal vanished like mist at dawn And silence held its breath beneath the pine as you read to me, words drifting like wind I tried to listen, I swear I did, but sleep folded me soft into earth When I woke, wildflowers wove through the tangles of my hair, and somewhere close, a campfire whispered of stories half forgotten Do you remember when I sat up, and you were already watching like an artist studying a half dreamed painting I sank into the canvas of your gaze, turned a shade of pastel red, washed in watercolor pink I haven't felt the same since Do you remember the heat? The forest bursting into prairie bloom your brother on my shoulders as we ran to the crooked hose behind the shack, where laughter trickled like cold water on bare skin, and summer peeled itself from our shoulders like old bark I disappeared slowly, like dew into moss And you, you found me in the hush of the woods, your footsteps soft as memory You brought new color to the trees, new focus to the canvas, as if your eyes rewrote the world I remember the cliff that stood like a cathedral above us We climbed, and when we rose, the valley opened like a hymn moose grazing in the hush, fish racing ribbons in the river And you, the way your braids caught the wind, the little bump at the end of your nose, eyes deep brown turning amber in the mercy of morning light I forgot how to swim I don’t remember what came between the midnight tickle fights and the blueberry muffins at dawn only that you wore my shoes with the laces pulled loose like a secret you left behind But I remember your grandpa and I talking of our bikes, the sun leaning low, while you slept in your usual way a slow kind of magic I waited But time came like it always does and we left, Drove home, Stopped for pickles halfway there I didn’t break the seal, my souvenir of that forest
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May 24
May 24, 2026 at 10:02 AM UTC
Pickles
Pickles Do you remember your grandpa’s cabin? Where signal vanished like mist at dawn And silence held its breath beneath the pine as you read to me, words drifting like wind I tried to listen, I swear I did, but sleep folded me soft into earth When I woke, wildflowers wove through the tangles of my hair, and somewhere close, a campfire whispered of stories half forgotten Do you remember when I sat up, and you were already watching like an artist studying a half dreamed painting I sank into the canvas of your gaze, turned a shade of pastel red, washed in watercolor pink I haven't felt the same since Do you remember the heat? The forest bursting into prairie bloom your brother on my shoulders as we ran to the crooked hose behind the shack, where laughter trickled like cold water on bare skin, and summer peeled itself from our shoulders like old bark I disappeared slowly, like dew into moss And you, you found me in the hush of the woods, your footsteps soft as memory You brought new color to the trees, new focus to the canvas, as if your eyes rewrote the world I remember the cliff that stood like a cathedral above us We climbed, and when we rose, the valley opened like a hymn moose grazing in the hush, fish racing ribbons in the river And you, the way your braids caught the wind, the little bump at the end of your nose, eyes deep brown turning amber in the mercy of morning light I forgot how to swim I don’t remember what came between the midnight tickle fights and the blueberry muffins at dawn only that you wore my shoes with the laces pulled loose like a secret you left behind But I remember your grandpa and I talking of our bikes, the sun leaning low, while you slept in your usual way a slow kind of magic I waited But time came like it always does and we left, Drove home, Stopped for pickles halfway there I didn’t break the seal, my souvenir of that forest
I still have the pickle jar some 2 years later. I wish I could post an image on here showing it in my nightstand.
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19/M/Colorado
May 24
May 24, 2026 at 10:02 AM UTC
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