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There was almost a fight once. I say almost, because it was. I saw it with my own eyes, in the bus station that isn’t there anymore because they blew it up and everyone cheered. I don’t remember it much because this is years ago and I hadn’t finished university yet but I was standing in line, as you do, avoiding eye contact, like the cucumber sandwiched between a grey old lady and a pregnant girl on her phone, waiting for the X4 or whatever it was called. I was eating something and then the black man stood up, not too far away, went up to the elderly man, told him to move, got in his face like an optician inspecting your eyes except with more venom. You could see it in the way he moved. I don’t know what words were spilt. I didn’t hear. I said I only saw it. Then he, the black man that is, kicked the other man in the shin with the tip of his boot. I just stood and watched like everybody else because it’s an unexpected moment in an unexceptional place as a brief scuffle began, a thrashing of arms, a spell of aggression. It ended. The old man sat down again, rubbing his leg as strangers spoke. The black man looked riled. Cops came out of nowhere as if they magically transported to a bus depot by mistake. I don’t know what happened next because I got my ride home and got on with my life, but I like to think they nicked him for causing a minor ruckus. But they probably didn’t. The buses don’t go there anymore because they exploded the station. I might’ve said that earlier.
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Sep 17, 2016
Sep 17, 2016 at 12:32 PM UTC
Greyfriars
There was almost a fight once. I say almost, because it was. I saw it with my own eyes, in the bus station that isn’t there anymore because they blew it up and everyone cheered. I don’t remember it much because this is years ago and I hadn’t finished university yet but I was standing in line, as you do, avoiding eye contact, like the cucumber sandwiched between a grey old lady and a pregnant girl on her phone, waiting for the X4 or whatever it was called. I was eating something and then the black man stood up, not too far away, went up to the elderly man, told him to move, got in his face like an optician inspecting your eyes except with more venom. You could see it in the way he moved. I don’t know what words were spilt. I didn’t hear. I said I only saw it. Then he, the black man that is, kicked the other man in the shin with the tip of his boot. I just stood and watched like everybody else because it’s an unexpected moment in an unexceptional place as a brief scuffle began, a thrashing of arms, a spell of aggression. It ended. The old man sat down again, rubbing his leg as strangers spoke. The black man looked riled. Cops came out of nowhere as if they magically transported to a bus depot by mistake. I don’t know what happened next because I got my ride home and got on with my life, but I like to think they nicked him for causing a minor ruckus. But they probably didn’t. The buses don’t go there anymore because they exploded the station. I might’ve said that earlier.
Written: September 2016. Explanation: A poem written in a deliberately chatty style in my own time, based on something that really happened (although my memory is a little hazy) in Greyfriars bus station in Northampton, England some years ago. The bus station was demolished in 2015. All feedback welcome. A link to my Facebook writing page can be found on my HP home page. NOTE: Many of my older pieces will be removed from HP at some point in the future.
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Sep 17, 2016
Sep 17, 2016 at 12:32 PM UTC
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