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On a hot rock Ticking of the clock No motivation Lazy aspiration Active hesitation The blood is on the surface Face is feeling hot Forgetful of the purpose That's the reason that you're lost Remember who you are A spirit in the making Open up your mind To the world you're forsaking
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May 23, 2015
May 23, 2015 at 2:07 AM UTC
Don't forget, You can breathe air
On a hot rock Ticking of the clock No motivation Lazy aspiration Active hesitation The blood is on the surface Face is feeling hot Forgetful of the purpose That's the reason that you're lost Remember who you are A spirit in the making Open up your mind To the world you're forsaking
I was short and brief with first half, and a little more complex with the other half to exaggerate the flow of it
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May 23, 2015
May 23, 2015 at 2:07 AM UTC
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