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Have you ever stopped to wonder at the trees, or look up at the clouds with awe, or just think about the world? Sometime, I bet you have, when you were a child. As children, we marvel at everything in the world. Everything's amazing. You know, children are right. Everything is amazing. Look around you. everyone here had a one in a million, million, million chance of existing, yet they do. One in a number too big to count to in a million lifetimes, and yet you all exist. Think of the world, now. Every part of it, the trees, the grass, every particle of water and air, had a one in an amazingly high number chance of existing. Combine, the odds of this world existing the way it does is nearly impossible.
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Apr 13, 2015
Apr 13, 2015 at 9:05 AM UTC
WIP that I need advice on
Have you ever stopped to wonder at the trees, or look up at the clouds with awe, or just think about the world? Sometime, I bet you have, when you were a child. As children, we marvel at everything in the world. Everything's amazing. You know, children are right. Everything is amazing. Look around you. everyone here had a one in a million, million, million chance of existing, yet they do. One in a number too big to count to in a million lifetimes, and yet you all exist. Think of the world, now. Every part of it, the trees, the grass, every particle of water and air, had a one in an amazingly high number chance of existing. Combine, the odds of this world existing the way it does is nearly impossible.
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Apr 13, 2015
Apr 13, 2015 at 9:05 AM UTC
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