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the formulaic...........how drab! events so monumental (and overwhelming!) petty egos broken on the gulf coast beaches (OUR BEACHES!) ------------- drifting on the summer breezes BESIDES DEATH, TELL ME "WHAT?" , MY FRIEND is drifting on the summer breezes tell me........ ..... tell me .................. .............tell me IF YOU, TOO, ARE , IF YOU, TOO IF YOU.......! ..........................ARE HERE! ----------- it's quite lonely in "the trenches" behind the barricades who does listen to the heart ..................the heart............. the bursting broken heart! --------- the formulaically protected egos the individualized and protected petty egos that we all are yield up our formulaic defences and COME FORTH!
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Jul 17, 2010
Jul 17, 2010 at 1:57 PM UTC
stop......start over (why not?)
the formulaic...........how drab! events so monumental (and overwhelming!) petty egos broken on the gulf coast beaches (OUR BEACHES!) ------------- drifting on the summer breezes BESIDES DEATH, TELL ME "WHAT?" , MY FRIEND is drifting on the summer breezes tell me........ ..... tell me .................. .............tell me IF YOU, TOO, ARE , IF YOU, TOO IF YOU.......! ..........................ARE HERE! ----------- it's quite lonely in "the trenches" behind the barricades who does listen to the heart ..................the heart............. the bursting broken heart! --------- the formulaically protected egos the individualized and protected petty egos that we all are yield up our formulaic defences and COME FORTH!
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jeffrey-robin
Jul 17, 2010
Jul 17, 2010 at 1:57 PM UTC
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