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Eggs wren eggs Jane said leaning into the hedgerow parting branches with her hands. Benny looked over her shoulder smelt apples and flowers. We mustn't touch them she said or the mother wren won't return again. Benny stood just behind her taking in her dark hair shoulder length her slim fingers holding back the branches. He could see the small eggs. A kid at school brought one of those in Benny said it had a hole at either end. That's bad she said robbing nests and taking a life. I guess it is Benny said he had it wrapped in an handkerchief and was showing us in the playground at recess. She stepped back and let the branches return to how they were. You wouldn't do that would you? she said. No of course not he said. She smiled I'm glad you wouldn't Daddy says it is against God's will she added. There was a sparrow's nest up over by the farm track Benny said. They walked up the lane and he showed her the nest and the eggs still there untouched or harmed. Their elbows touched as they leaned together to look skin on skin. He wanted to kiss her but didn't in case it was (in her father's eyes) a sin.
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Mar 21, 2017
Mar 21, 2017 at 4:28 PM UTC
EGGS 1961
Eggs wren eggs Jane said leaning into the hedgerow parting branches with her hands. Benny looked over her shoulder smelt apples and flowers. We mustn't touch them she said or the mother wren won't return again. Benny stood just behind her taking in her dark hair shoulder length her slim fingers holding back the branches. He could see the small eggs. A kid at school brought one of those in Benny said it had a hole at either end. That's bad she said robbing nests and taking a life. I guess it is Benny said he had it wrapped in an handkerchief and was showing us in the playground at recess. She stepped back and let the branches return to how they were. You wouldn't do that would you? she said. No of course not he said. She smiled I'm glad you wouldn't Daddy says it is against God's will she added. There was a sparrow's nest up over by the farm track Benny said. They walked up the lane and he showed her the nest and the eggs still there untouched or harmed. Their elbows touched as they leaned together to look skin on skin. He wanted to kiss her but didn't in case it was (in her father's eyes) a sin.
A BOY AND GIRL IN A COUNTRY LANE IN 1961
TerryCollett
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Mar 21, 2017
Mar 21, 2017 at 4:28 PM UTC
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