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I hate using fullstops in my poems. I want you to smoothly glide Line to line, Perhaps let a comma guide You here and there But no stops, Just inhalations, Imbibation Of free flowing sentences That carry you comfortably afloat, To the fluid denouement Of the poem I wrote
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Sep 20, 2014
Sep 20, 2014 at 1:20 PM UTC
Fluid
I hate using fullstops in my poems. I want you to smoothly glide Line to line, Perhaps let a comma guide You here and there But no stops, Just inhalations, Imbibation Of free flowing sentences That carry you comfortably afloat, To the fluid denouement Of the poem I wrote
ghazal-tansir
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Sep 20, 2014
Sep 20, 2014 at 1:20 PM UTC
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