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Node poem here: http://www.spicynodes.org/a/7d2bb6e5228c163e0f558105ee877522 Nodes: set up on the nice spongy ground a ring of stones where a fire goes strawberries all around but they are quite now just as the fire went when the wind blew they coat the ground but their fruit is asleep deep in their green an idea in their genes still none of this is why day goes
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Oct 8, 2015
Oct 8, 2015 at 10:05 AM UTC
Why Day Goes
Node poem here: http://www.spicynodes.org/a/7d2bb6e5228c163e0f558105ee877522 Nodes: set up on the nice spongy ground a ring of stones where a fire goes strawberries all around but they are quite now just as the fire went when the wind blew they coat the ground but their fruit is asleep deep in their green an idea in their genes still none of this is why day goes
Playing with a non-ordered form. Try to keep the phrases short and open-ended, and open-beginninged, so that each line can be attached to any of the others. Sense the sense in the shift of order.
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Oct 8, 2015
Oct 8, 2015 at 10:05 AM UTC
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