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Just a suggestion just a thought, or sense posting every poem you've ever wrote in a minute's, present tense Overflowing over-stacking over-zealous, enthusiastic no one wants to read anthologies it makes them trite, and plastic So, for once my friend I'll offer some advice I've made the same mistake posting everything, I ever did, too quick making common rice, from all my sirloin steak
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Jan 5, 2018
Jan 5, 2018 at 8:03 AM UTC
Too much, too fast, too profuse
Just a suggestion just a thought, or sense posting every poem you've ever wrote in a minute's, present tense Overflowing over-stacking over-zealous, enthusiastic no one wants to read anthologies it makes them trite, and plastic So, for once my friend I'll offer some advice I've made the same mistake posting everything, I ever did, too quick making common rice, from all my sirloin steak
I made this mistake when I first got here, putting up all my stuff cut and paste from my stored files, it over flowed the "Latest" tab, and like 3 in 4 of my poems never got any looks and/or comments. What I wish I had done, was post one every hour or so, it allows separation of material, permitting people to consume at a leisurely pace, rather than force feeding :D Just a suggestion.
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Jan 5, 2018
Jan 5, 2018 at 8:03 AM UTC
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