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I evoke that day in the park when when you finally noticed my existence after months of hoping. Waiting. There you were, on the bench as the snow began to fall, sipping that can of Coke clenched in your hands.   You looked glum; mind you, I was too. That navy coat you wore, your ginger hair stood out like streams of fire. It was just me and you, you and I. My phone rang but I ignored it, prepared to walk towards you. I’d say hello if I could but for some reason (I should ask you why) you stood up, my breath hung in anticipation. The scrunch scrunch scrunch of fallen snow, I looked up, there you were, falling paper surrounding the two of us. An invisible straitjacket tightened around me, my voice box left on vacation and you said…
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Mar 7, 2012
Mar 7, 2012 at 10:18 AM UTC
The Park
I evoke that day in the park when when you finally noticed my existence after months of hoping. Waiting. There you were, on the bench as the snow began to fall, sipping that can of Coke clenched in your hands.   You looked glum; mind you, I was too. That navy coat you wore, your ginger hair stood out like streams of fire. It was just me and you, you and I. My phone rang but I ignored it, prepared to walk towards you. I’d say hello if I could but for some reason (I should ask you why) you stood up, my breath hung in anticipation. The scrunch scrunch scrunch of fallen snow, I looked up, there you were, falling paper surrounding the two of us. An invisible straitjacket tightened around me, my voice box left on vacation and you said…
Written: November 2011 and March 2012. Explanation: My fourth poem written for university. Certainly not one of my best. The situation described is completely fabricated.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Mar 7, 2012
Mar 7, 2012 at 10:18 AM UTC
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