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Had he been proud of you all these summers, all these years had he walked you home holding your hand for everyone to see? Had he been taking you to the beach, proud to hold the corners of your waist? Had he worked hard for this girl you gave him for him to deserve her everything? So does he really love you more than the blinds closed in his windows, more than the sheets to cover you under, more than the lust, the kisses, the passion of cravings, does he really show the love as he say. As he says "I love you". Had he really dedicated all the sweetness to calling you Sweetie? Or he's a sugar coated guy with plastic gloves and masks in advertisement of a sweet temptation to a diabetic? (j.t)
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Aug 15, 2016
Aug 15, 2016 at 7:24 PM UTC
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Had he been proud of you all these summers, all these years had he walked you home holding your hand for everyone to see? Had he been taking you to the beach, proud to hold the corners of your waist? Had he worked hard for this girl you gave him for him to deserve her everything? So does he really love you more than the blinds closed in his windows, more than the sheets to cover you under, more than the lust, the kisses, the passion of cravings, does he really show the love as he say. As he says "I love you". Had he really dedicated all the sweetness to calling you Sweetie? Or he's a sugar coated guy with plastic gloves and masks in advertisement of a sweet temptation to a diabetic? (j.t)
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Aug 15, 2016
Aug 15, 2016 at 7:24 PM UTC
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