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Not in a sense that I want to own it, or that I want to take it away from others and conquer the ways for which it stood and whoever might have been there before me. But I want to name an island. A cryptic, unforgiving name and not in a sense that I’ll be leaving it, because of the harsh and abrasive things its done. Not because I was ready to be left standing there not knowing the starting and ending point, like how I was left in your bed. You didn’t make coffee or ask me what time it was or if I wanted a shower. You don’t black-out the sun anymore. Now at nine in the morning the sun shines early through the window and the aqua walls flood and I’m stranded on your brown-plaid bed, in the middle of your room and you just swam off. And I’m naming it nothing, because why would I name an island when I have no one to share it with?
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Dec 11, 2012
Dec 11, 2012 at 12:52 AM UTC
I Want to Name an Island
Not in a sense that I want to own it, or that I want to take it away from others and conquer the ways for which it stood and whoever might have been there before me. But I want to name an island. A cryptic, unforgiving name and not in a sense that I’ll be leaving it, because of the harsh and abrasive things its done. Not because I was ready to be left standing there not knowing the starting and ending point, like how I was left in your bed. You didn’t make coffee or ask me what time it was or if I wanted a shower. You don’t black-out the sun anymore. Now at nine in the morning the sun shines early through the window and the aqua walls flood and I’m stranded on your brown-plaid bed, in the middle of your room and you just swam off. And I’m naming it nothing, because why would I name an island when I have no one to share it with?
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