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18 white carriages glide into the station onto the platform the hustle and bustle of people walking in and out of the automated doors. some in their own little words, supplied by the melody through the little white wires connecting their ears to their pockets. some with their phones to their ears, chatting away. some just staring into the distance, waiting for the next exciting thing in their life to happen. people sitting on the little green seats lined up against the walls of the train. some completely blocked by newspapers, some sound asleep. the sound of the rain hitting the windows at a 50 degree angle (pitter-patter) the sight of you as i walked in, with your wide smile and your eyes transfixed on me. all handsome with your dark hair swept to the side. and as we sat down, i observed you from the reflection on the opposite window observing me.
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Sep 25, 2014
Sep 25, 2014 at 12:45 PM UTC
train things
18 white carriages glide into the station onto the platform the hustle and bustle of people walking in and out of the automated doors. some in their own little words, supplied by the melody through the little white wires connecting their ears to their pockets. some with their phones to their ears, chatting away. some just staring into the distance, waiting for the next exciting thing in their life to happen. people sitting on the little green seats lined up against the walls of the train. some completely blocked by newspapers, some sound asleep. the sound of the rain hitting the windows at a 50 degree angle (pitter-patter) the sight of you as i walked in, with your wide smile and your eyes transfixed on me. all handsome with your dark hair swept to the side. and as we sat down, i observed you from the reflection on the opposite window observing me.
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Sep 25, 2014
Sep 25, 2014 at 12:45 PM UTC
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