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My rat had babies, five days ago. They are eight in number, little pink and black wrinkly fingers. Closed eyes, Ears not fully formed, Wriggling on my palm in the depths of their sleeping. I came home late last night, and i was drawn to see them, so i went and felt for them, hiding in their nest. A hair twisted around one's neck and one's foot. Tweezers and pins and delicate maneuvering, allowed us to get them free. They are ok now, but one wee boy will limp his first steps even though i stayed up all night, raising his leg and massaging it, hoping to drain fluid from his swollen limb, giving him kisses and casting healing spells. Good vibes don't fix everything.
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Nov 16, 2013
Nov 16, 2013 at 10:49 PM UTC
Rat babies
My rat had babies, five days ago. They are eight in number, little pink and black wrinkly fingers. Closed eyes, Ears not fully formed, Wriggling on my palm in the depths of their sleeping. I came home late last night, and i was drawn to see them, so i went and felt for them, hiding in their nest. A hair twisted around one's neck and one's foot. Tweezers and pins and delicate maneuvering, allowed us to get them free. They are ok now, but one wee boy will limp his first steps even though i stayed up all night, raising his leg and massaging it, hoping to drain fluid from his swollen limb, giving him kisses and casting healing spells. Good vibes don't fix everything.
marigold
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New Zealander
Nov 16, 2013
Nov 16, 2013 at 10:49 PM UTC
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