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Oh, to be so vulnerable I trusted you so much You lifted my shirt, and I thought you saw my soul Your touch was painful Oh, to be so vulnerable To say the beauty I hold And say I look good in white, not gold I trusted you with my body Oh, to be so vulnerable Even the dunes slope next to the shore But my love dimmed no more Isn't love supposed to be tolerable Oh, to be so vulnerable I wasn't aware addiction could be a caprice For touch, there was never a price But then you left, and I felt the mellowness of hands without its fellowship Oh, to be so tied To want to stray but never hide To feel the fear but not the wrongs To feel the stabs but not see the blood The Finest Act in God's way Was to make a tune never to be played
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May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025 at 1:00 AM UTC
Finest Act
Oh, to be so vulnerable I trusted you so much You lifted my shirt, and I thought you saw my soul Your touch was painful Oh, to be so vulnerable To say the beauty I hold And say I look good in white, not gold I trusted you with my body Oh, to be so vulnerable Even the dunes slope next to the shore But my love dimmed no more Isn't love supposed to be tolerable Oh, to be so vulnerable I wasn't aware addiction could be a caprice For touch, there was never a price But then you left, and I felt the mellowness of hands without its fellowship Oh, to be so tied To want to stray but never hide To feel the fear but not the wrongs To feel the stabs but not see the blood The Finest Act in God's way Was to make a tune never to be played
emotional vulnerability of love
marebear
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16/F/United States
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025 at 1:00 AM UTC
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