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It feels like a liquid iron: Sharp and cold and sickening. The freezing metal begins From my throat and moves to My body. By then I feel nothing But numbness. It's as if I'm falling But there is no bottom. I hope there Is no bottom, because if there is then I will surely hit it hard enough to explode upon the sharp-smooth black-blue slippery wet dark cave bottom. But I am intact. I stop spinning. It was all synthetic. Merely a glimpse into your hell That jealousy has made my own
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Mar 6, 2014
Mar 6, 2014 at 12:34 AM UTC
Window to Hell
It feels like a liquid iron: Sharp and cold and sickening. The freezing metal begins From my throat and moves to My body. By then I feel nothing But numbness. It's as if I'm falling But there is no bottom. I hope there Is no bottom, because if there is then I will surely hit it hard enough to explode upon the sharp-smooth black-blue slippery wet dark cave bottom. But I am intact. I stop spinning. It was all synthetic. Merely a glimpse into your hell That jealousy has made my own
ryan-bates
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Mar 6, 2014
Mar 6, 2014 at 12:34 AM UTC
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