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strange enough, that word choice, ****** for they are all, (or mostly) men they get on their knees, so eager to please write a poem, newbie, they will be your partner pretenders, instant followers but the trick employed is transference they want you bad to worship them, that being the purest of their false intentions, their oldest trick, guilt, "if I follow you, you should follow me!" their kiss Pass laden with std's, they want implanted in your hp inbox The std is vanity. what they need, what they want you to imbibe, is their world view, poetry-is-by-the-numbers the number of followers, (how I detest that word) the number of reads, oft manipulated, by cyber techno b.s. so understand, this craft, you may have chosen, is work, so hard, because it comes from the gut, wrenching pressing issues inside you it is about everything you want us to understand about you, your vision peculiar, without revealing your rawest self so obviously know this in advance each poem has a unique audience, as unique as you years took me, took me to grasp this simply complex notion, over come myself within myself, that self-same infection that audience is you write to please yourself, be your harshest critic, popularity will find you your truths, withour pandering, will finds the seekers, the quality lovers, the truth hungerers they will find you, of that, be assured amidst the millions of words, yours are yours, fear not the plaintive worry, are they any good? for the courage to post yourself, is the very self same answer to that, the bells toll for thee if it pleased you, pained you, enough that you released into this world, in poem form, it is good enough poetry is ego no question, but keep yourself on the right side of the line, separating your ego from the egotist, and your poetry will no question, forever live, a mark of you upon the world let us be brothers, let us be sisters, David and Jonathan, Ruth and Naomi, but not Cain and Abel, no anger, no jealousy, just raw, refined, truth, the truth of you, which cannot be diminished by enumeration, cannot be counted, only blessed
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Nov 16, 2014
Nov 16, 2014 at 11:55 AM UTC
Poetry ****** (each poem has a unique audience)
strange enough, that word choice, ****** for they are all, (or mostly) men they get on their knees, so eager to please write a poem, newbie, they will be your partner pretenders, instant followers but the trick employed is transference they want you bad to worship them, that being the purest of their false intentions, their oldest trick, guilt, "if I follow you, you should follow me!" their kiss Pass laden with std's, they want implanted in your hp inbox The std is vanity. what they need, what they want you to imbibe, is their world view, poetry-is-by-the-numbers the number of followers, (how I detest that word) the number of reads, oft manipulated, by cyber techno b.s. so understand, this craft, you may have chosen, is work, so hard, because it comes from the gut, wrenching pressing issues inside you it is about everything you want us to understand about you, your vision peculiar, without revealing your rawest self so obviously know this in advance each poem has a unique audience, as unique as you years took me, took me to grasp this simply complex notion, over come myself within myself, that self-same infection that audience is you write to please yourself, be your harshest critic, popularity will find you your truths, withour pandering, will finds the seekers, the quality lovers, the truth hungerers they will find you, of that, be assured amidst the millions of words, yours are yours, fear not the plaintive worry, are they any good? for the courage to post yourself, is the very self same answer to that, the bells toll for thee if it pleased you, pained you, enough that you released into this world, in poem form, it is good enough poetry is ego no question, but keep yourself on the right side of the line, separating your ego from the egotist, and your poetry will no question, forever live, a mark of you upon the world let us be brothers, let us be sisters, David and Jonathan, Ruth and Naomi, but not Cain and Abel, no anger, no jealousy, just raw, refined, truth, the truth of you, which cannot be diminished by enumeration, cannot be counted, only blessed
An afterthought: thru the HP site, I have made good friends, encouraged many, and received much encouragement, affection....be open to good hearted people for there are many...trust your instincts...this is the important truth
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Nov 16, 2014
Nov 16, 2014 at 11:55 AM UTC
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