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A friend came over, asked me how I was, There was no time to answer, because She told me what she thought. So I acquiesced and fell into line, Sang her the blues in 12 bar time. I didn't know something was wrong with me Thought it was only PMT Or a case of fatigue. But no apparently I’m depressed, Need to be more like Jesus Her diagnosis brought all my thanksgiving As she scanned my life, judged all my living She always knows better, and she tells me how. Hope she comes again; I feel so much better now.
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Oct 5, 2017
Oct 5, 2017 at 10:40 AM UTC
With a Friend Like This
A friend came over, asked me how I was, There was no time to answer, because She told me what she thought. So I acquiesced and fell into line, Sang her the blues in 12 bar time. I didn't know something was wrong with me Thought it was only PMT Or a case of fatigue. But no apparently I’m depressed, Need to be more like Jesus Her diagnosis brought all my thanksgiving As she scanned my life, judged all my living She always knows better, and she tells me how. Hope she comes again; I feel so much better now.
blair-baker
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Oct 5, 2017
Oct 5, 2017 at 10:40 AM UTC
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