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There’s an old Christmas tree— dead, without its needles— floating in the pond. I remember the first warm day in February when my uncle dragged the still-green tree to the center of the ice. He thought it would thaw within a week, and the tree would sink. Minnows could find safety from the big-mouth bass and bluegills while they hid in their buttress of little branches. But it got cold again, and the ice didn't melt till late March. The green needles persevered, preserved by the frost, the branches blanketed in snow. The needles browned and fell from the tips when it got warm. Now the tree’s cocked  awkwardly on its side, and the very top— the part you might place a star or a little cherub as the finishing touch to a Christmas tradition— scrapes the dying and decomposing leaves on the  muddy bottom. The tree, the trunk, that erroneous spot drifting near the edges of the blue-green water —it floats aimlessly as the minnows are swallowed whole.
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Jul 22, 2014
Jul 22, 2014 at 11:28 AM UTC
A Late Winter
There’s an old Christmas tree— dead, without its needles— floating in the pond. I remember the first warm day in February when my uncle dragged the still-green tree to the center of the ice. He thought it would thaw within a week, and the tree would sink. Minnows could find safety from the big-mouth bass and bluegills while they hid in their buttress of little branches. But it got cold again, and the ice didn't melt till late March. The green needles persevered, preserved by the frost, the branches blanketed in snow. The needles browned and fell from the tips when it got warm. Now the tree’s cocked  awkwardly on its side, and the very top— the part you might place a star or a little cherub as the finishing touch to a Christmas tradition— scrapes the dying and decomposing leaves on the  muddy bottom. The tree, the trunk, that erroneous spot drifting near the edges of the blue-green water —it floats aimlessly as the minnows are swallowed whole.
jake-leonard
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Jul 22, 2014
Jul 22, 2014 at 11:28 AM UTC
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