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Crowded

I now know why I struggled

what it was I couldn't see

for all this time I thought

that us meant you and me

 

You were hesitant 'bout moving in

I saw doubt within your eyes

I had no idea another lay

behind your compromise

 

I thought its what we wanted

to be just you and me

How could I be so stupid

How could I not see

 

You weren't weighing decision

careful choosing right from wrong

You were thinking how your choices

would affect her all along

 

I now know why you struggled

what it was I couldn't see

for all this time our partnership

had member number three

 

I really had no clue

You did well to hide it so

But now us is just too crowded

So its time for me to go.

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May 18, 2010
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