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Crimson hope smears the still curtain of the worlds; Larks slice the silence hovering by the brooding clouds; Ridges of pain past traced on the firmament, lingering fragrances scattered on silken hair, saline tears dripping off the edges of the horizon: I hear more in your frozen gaze. Your heart pulsing to the rhythm of a new dawn; But the discord, the occasional discord. Why does pain visit us? A swirling vortex of colours: At the center, a heart of bluish white; This vortex called life; You must die humiliated carrying the unbearable burden of love wearing a crown of bristling pride nailed across the twilight sky, and hung for three nights; Before resurrection into a body of love. A sink, yes, a salvaged sink. It is on display. After your pride has been flushed down a line intersects a plane and becomes a dot. Change your view to spot it. A clear body of water. Ripples on the surface, by the last rain. An emergent sun, out of the brooding clouds in the skies. A hundred of them on the waving waters.
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Aug 9, 2013
Aug 9, 2013 at 4:48 PM UTC
Vortex
Crimson hope smears the still curtain of the worlds; Larks slice the silence hovering by the brooding clouds; Ridges of pain past traced on the firmament, lingering fragrances scattered on silken hair, saline tears dripping off the edges of the horizon: I hear more in your frozen gaze. Your heart pulsing to the rhythm of a new dawn; But the discord, the occasional discord. Why does pain visit us? A swirling vortex of colours: At the center, a heart of bluish white; This vortex called life; You must die humiliated carrying the unbearable burden of love wearing a crown of bristling pride nailed across the twilight sky, and hung for three nights; Before resurrection into a body of love. A sink, yes, a salvaged sink. It is on display. After your pride has been flushed down a line intersects a plane and becomes a dot. Change your view to spot it. A clear body of water. Ripples on the surface, by the last rain. An emergent sun, out of the brooding clouds in the skies. A hundred of them on the waving waters.
An art-narrative: combining description and cubist abstraction in a stream-of-conscious sort of meditation, in an attempt to peer at the heart of hope and love...!  Usual elements remain...
prabhu-iyer
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Aug 9, 2013
Aug 9, 2013 at 4:48 PM UTC
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