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We stole away                     (The air cool, and lively),                                     Strolling down a side street at a calm, and quiet pace.           The ambient noise of several a raised voice echoed                              faintly through pulses of bass.                                                                                                                                                                 In that moment,                              A world removed...               (Something came over me) With impulse, revelry;                       (Grabbing her hand) -- "May I have this dance?"--and then                                 we swam in waves of 'Frenesi'.                                                        Nervously laughing,                    you, always self-conscious                          It was one of things I so loved about you                                 I wanted us to breathe the air of life lived carefree,                               And to bask in adventures anew. Laughing, twirling On a moonlit night Time stood still, as we swayed like waves in the ocean The world was ours, near those downtown bars as we painted the sidewalk with motion. But life moves on And time moves forward.. Silence replaced laughter, joy with indifference And with a colossal divide, a crack at a time her face grew blurred from the distance.                                                         And then one day                                 A vague silhouette.           The lover I knew was gone, though once she was close..         Those fiery chocolate eyes were now veneered with                          icy guise..there was no more repose.                                                             Old memories,                           Nostalgic thoughts.                     It seemed a losing battle, the battle we fought;                So, raise a toast, I say:  à la fille que je connaissais,                                   j'espère que tu trouver de la joie.
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May 26, 2020
May 26, 2020 at 1:55 PM UTC
A Moonlit Night Near the Bars in San Francisco
We stole away                     (The air cool, and lively),                                     Strolling down a side street at a calm, and quiet pace.           The ambient noise of several a raised voice echoed                              faintly through pulses of bass.                                                                                                                                                                 In that moment,                              A world removed...               (Something came over me) With impulse, revelry;                       (Grabbing her hand) -- "May I have this dance?"--and then                                 we swam in waves of 'Frenesi'.                                                        Nervously laughing,                    you, always self-conscious                          It was one of things I so loved about you                                 I wanted us to breathe the air of life lived carefree,                               And to bask in adventures anew. Laughing, twirling On a moonlit night Time stood still, as we swayed like waves in the ocean The world was ours, near those downtown bars as we painted the sidewalk with motion. But life moves on And time moves forward.. Silence replaced laughter, joy with indifference And with a colossal divide, a crack at a time her face grew blurred from the distance.                                                         And then one day                                 A vague silhouette.           The lover I knew was gone, though once she was close..         Those fiery chocolate eyes were now veneered with                          icy guise..there was no more repose.                                                             Old memories,                           Nostalgic thoughts.                     It seemed a losing battle, the battle we fought;                So, raise a toast, I say:  à la fille que je connaissais,                                   j'espère que tu trouver de la joie.
If you've never heard Frenesi by Artie Shaw, I highly encourage you to. Fantastic song if it's your style.
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May 26, 2020
May 26, 2020 at 1:55 PM UTC
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