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the saying goes "you must fail, to succeed" but in my life i did nothing but fail the story of the life i live and lived were a statistic board of my failures in life as a person, as a son, as a partner, and as a friend succeeding is one thing i am not good at probably will never be good at but failing is one thing i know must of all once life given up on you you give up hope you give up faith you give up trust i only speak the truth and tell the world what it really is and become real is because i have nothing else in life to give. the raven may come for me one day and that day i'll probably succeed in death but living is no longer in the balance of failure or success it all crumbled down beneath my feet like sand underneath a palm tree located on gravel that one can not specify to see but know it is there. that is how the palm tree stands tall through my failure someone else is given the opportunity to stand tall as i crumble beneath ones feet. the life i chose has no meaning -Julius Caldwell
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Jan 28, 2015
Jan 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM UTC
success of failing
the saying goes "you must fail, to succeed" but in my life i did nothing but fail the story of the life i live and lived were a statistic board of my failures in life as a person, as a son, as a partner, and as a friend succeeding is one thing i am not good at probably will never be good at but failing is one thing i know must of all once life given up on you you give up hope you give up faith you give up trust i only speak the truth and tell the world what it really is and become real is because i have nothing else in life to give. the raven may come for me one day and that day i'll probably succeed in death but living is no longer in the balance of failure or success it all crumbled down beneath my feet like sand underneath a palm tree located on gravel that one can not specify to see but know it is there. that is how the palm tree stands tall through my failure someone else is given the opportunity to stand tall as i crumble beneath ones feet. the life i chose has no meaning -Julius Caldwell
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julius-caldwell
Jan 28, 2015
Jan 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM UTC
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