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message in a bottle

i crafted an exquisite note

to be sent along

to the exquisite woman that no longer deserved it.

 

i sat down in a wildflower patch

with an empty bottle

which gave me the courage

to roll the parchment

 

the ants in all their fury

held no charge against me

and the strategically buried daggers

left nothing more than an impression

on my bare feet

 

nor did the canals

formed by tears' errosion on the cheek

the largest tree now long dead

a landmark lost to time

a love

a partner

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allan-jain-bonder
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Jun 2, 2014
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