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I did all of this work with extra help I am not scared to fail How could life be so tortured? It’s like the lord wants us to push ourselves Then there comes College Money is everything Got my parents who depend on me I just cannot give up at all Even though I always feel like giving up No one said It would be easy You just see how much pain I received I said “ The pain makes me wanna die” But I don’t think that is necessary We all suffer a lot By way of handling life, It is to find a way to handle this pain Water’s are falling everyday from these eyes Men are not suppose to cry But that’s how we care about  being successful To succeed is to survive in many obstacles
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Jun 5, 2016
Jun 5, 2016 at 11:48 PM UTC
Survive & Succeed
I did all of this work with extra help I am not scared to fail How could life be so tortured? It’s like the lord wants us to push ourselves Then there comes College Money is everything Got my parents who depend on me I just cannot give up at all Even though I always feel like giving up No one said It would be easy You just see how much pain I received I said “ The pain makes me wanna die” But I don’t think that is necessary We all suffer a lot By way of handling life, It is to find a way to handle this pain Water’s are falling everyday from these eyes Men are not suppose to cry But that’s how we care about  being successful To succeed is to survive in many obstacles
brian-joel
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Jun 5, 2016
Jun 5, 2016 at 11:48 PM UTC
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