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A dozen pairs of eyes

1. Fallow brown, like he's poured his whole soul out through the gold sieve and lies in wait to be replenished.

 

2. The color of the ocean. Blue, I guess, but that’s not even the half of it. All the ruggedness of the waves—forming up, breaking, and forming again like life is only the motions. Her eyes are blue, but you could hardly tell.

 

3. A hand-painted bowl of fresh chocolate frosting from which the most immature hands soonest get a mouthful.

 

4. Beautiful. Like, drop dead gorgeous. I’d dig my own grave and stick to rolling in it if she ever looked at me some type of way. Their color? I don’t know. But most of all, I dare to wonder about the bludgeoned scar between them.

 

5. Sturdy cobalt. Far more indicative of her steady heart than gold could ever hope to be. Still susceptible to tear, but not so easily warped by heat or stress.

 

6. Simply brown. No, red? It’s always been hard to tell through the fog. Truthful like the rawest earth, I’ll call her mahogany.

 

7. Faded blue spray paint over a slate gray wall. Forcibly muted after her years of blasting music, but there’s still that rogue twinkle to them that I pray slips through the cracks.

 

8. Coffee, with all the vim and vigor to make you click your heels and fall in love.

 

9. Unripe lime seen lazing in the shade. Not fit for a margarita just yet, but straining at the bit nonetheless.

 

10. Hazel, although I still don’t know what the **** that actually is. Whatever. It looks nice on her resume.

 

11. Green. Or were they blue? The memories of her were too wonderful, too important, that I had to let the littlest details fade away first.

 

12. The crystallized seafoam that made me realize I deserved to feel alive, too.

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eottinger01
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Jun 24, 2018
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Dedicated to any pair of eyes that's ever struggled to raise itself from the sights they've grown used to.

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#eyes#color#beauty#love#depth#admiration#infatuation#daydreaming#vague
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