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Once they were remembered As beauteous blue-eyed angels Who assiduously Served the creator Once thought of as the holy ones Who shone the brightest Free will and they chose evil The fallen and their father Whose actions Gave way to torment All the unpardonable sins They committed In the age When atrocity prevailed Now all they seek Is retribution Sparse and angry Gliding in the skies With rayless halos And ruptured wings Listen as God cries At what has become Of his creation.
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Jul 4, 2014
Jul 4, 2014 at 12:17 PM UTC
The Fallen
Once they were remembered As beauteous blue-eyed angels Who assiduously Served the creator Once thought of as the holy ones Who shone the brightest Free will and they chose evil The fallen and their father Whose actions Gave way to torment All the unpardonable sins They committed In the age When atrocity prevailed Now all they seek Is retribution Sparse and angry Gliding in the skies With rayless halos And ruptured wings Listen as God cries At what has become Of his creation.
This was my first stab at this kind of poetry/writing. Posted it a few months back, tweaked it a bit and posting it again.
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Jul 4, 2014
Jul 4, 2014 at 12:17 PM UTC
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