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Unsure in thought, feelings deadened fostered by the dark sea, the raft dithering, words hauntingly absent, lapping up each syllable, a sinking note, plummeting like a depth charge, tying me down to the sea bed in unknown shifting currents, the tide turning me over and over, water logged and sand bagged in deep coral shifts. I drowned a thousand letters, bit into sentences; no one heard me. Coldness shared its chilling weight, leaving spaces where conversation once played out, hand crafted with laughter.  I know the embers well, the ashes scatter, float as they dwindle and *****
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Apr 8, 2015
Apr 8, 2015 at 8:02 AM UTC
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Unsure in thought, feelings deadened fostered by the dark sea, the raft dithering, words hauntingly absent, lapping up each syllable, a sinking note, plummeting like a depth charge, tying me down to the sea bed in unknown shifting currents, the tide turning me over and over, water logged and sand bagged in deep coral shifts. I drowned a thousand letters, bit into sentences; no one heard me. Coldness shared its chilling weight, leaving spaces where conversation once played out, hand crafted with laughter.  I know the embers well, the ashes scatter, float as they dwindle and *****
laura-susan-smith
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Apr 8, 2015
Apr 8, 2015 at 8:02 AM UTC
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