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*hellopoetry.com/collection/20186/years/ A few hours pass with the boy still there, Drawn to his body like he's tethered. A few more and he's floating in moonlight But no sleep will bring him comfort. A small fish catches his restless eye, A quick shadow against the current's silver. Closer, the boy sees sharp teeth bared. The fish eyes his corpse like its dinner. A desperate NO escapes his throat As he scrambles to stop the scavenger. He cannot, and he cries out in frustration, His sobs joining the sounds of nature. Ethereal tears fall on ethereal hands As despair morphs into very real anger.
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Apr 10, 2016
Apr 10, 2016 at 11:05 PM UTC
Years (Part II*)
*hellopoetry.com/collection/20186/years/ A few hours pass with the boy still there, Drawn to his body like he's tethered. A few more and he's floating in moonlight But no sleep will bring him comfort. A small fish catches his restless eye, A quick shadow against the current's silver. Closer, the boy sees sharp teeth bared. The fish eyes his corpse like its dinner. A desperate NO escapes his throat As he scrambles to stop the scavenger. He cannot, and he cries out in frustration, His sobs joining the sounds of nature. Ethereal tears fall on ethereal hands As despair morphs into very real anger.
Here's another one. I am making this up as I go along. Please leave feedback! :) As for me, I liked the first one more… Also, I am running out of /ər/ words help
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Apr 10, 2016
Apr 10, 2016 at 11:05 PM UTC
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