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~for Lori Jones McCaffery who wrote me of: “Her hands lay gently joined” “So tenderly put” <> So sweet and tenderly put this trilateral phrase, a complement, So sweet and tenderly put this lovely, geometrical compliment, thus birthing this missive that was delivered in a mere 9 minutes, a simple re-tribute to a poem scraped from eyelids, leaked from my heart   of what I Witnessed, of what I Emoted as my woman, rustled besides me in the early morning sheets, stirring my heart, as she astirring slowly awake. love this title Lori has gifted me, for so few and far are the in-betweens of the people, places and things, that are so tenderly inserted in this banged up humdrum, football game of daily living, pierced by primary moments, even secondary seconds, of heart~glows that pierce the noise, even-in-silence put a suffusion of the chest, kissing of the brain, colored kernels that dare not go unnoticed, this eloquent, perfect, thank you is a whispering tremolo note that wakes me up again, with scents of gratitude, for those who take care, those who give care, who value tenderness in soft spoken gestures, brash and bold, smartly wisdomed, so to honor her, to honor this moment of grateful inspiration, I insert the exact moment these senses imploded in my chest, ordering me to give thanks, take care, validate the valuation of words, so tenderly put 2:10pm Mon Jan 30 2023
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Jan 30, 2023
Jan 30, 2023 at 2:27 PM UTC
“So Tenderly Put”
~for Lori Jones McCaffery who wrote me of: “Her hands lay gently joined” “So tenderly put” <> So sweet and tenderly put this trilateral phrase, a complement, So sweet and tenderly put this lovely, geometrical compliment, thus birthing this missive that was delivered in a mere 9 minutes, a simple re-tribute to a poem scraped from eyelids, leaked from my heart   of what I Witnessed, of what I Emoted as my woman, rustled besides me in the early morning sheets, stirring my heart, as she astirring slowly awake. love this title Lori has gifted me, for so few and far are the in-betweens of the people, places and things, that are so tenderly inserted in this banged up humdrum, football game of daily living, pierced by primary moments, even secondary seconds, of heart~glows that pierce the noise, even-in-silence put a suffusion of the chest, kissing of the brain, colored kernels that dare not go unnoticed, this eloquent, perfect, thank you is a whispering tremolo note that wakes me up again, with scents of gratitude, for those who take care, those who give care, who value tenderness in soft spoken gestures, brash and bold, smartly wisdomed, so to honor her, to honor this moment of grateful inspiration, I insert the exact moment these senses imploded in my chest, ordering me to give thanks, take care, validate the valuation of words, so tenderly put 2:10pm Mon Jan 30 2023
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Jan 30, 2023
Jan 30, 2023 at 2:27 PM UTC
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